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to never get to feel the warmth
of your arms wrapped around me tight
to never get to watch you
as you fall asleep at night

to never get to hear the words
that your silence screams
to never get to be the one
who lives inside your dreams

to never have the chance
to just sit and talk with you
to never get the time
to give our hearts their due

to never get to tell you
just how much i care
to never have the feeling of
simply knowing that you're there

to never get to kiss you
until our lips can kiss no more
to never get to say good-bye
as you walk out the door

to never know the love of you
and all that you possess
to never shiver head to toe
from your soft caress

to never have you as my girl
and I, never to be that guy
to never have to miss you
so bad it makes me cry

to never have to hide away
where no one else can see
to never have to deal with knowing
you and i can't be

to never say good-bye to you
i fear i cant let go
to never see your face again
for then i'd never know
©2003-2009 =WildNDark
:iconwildndark:

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:icondisillusioness:
Wow. :) Your poem is really moving, and I love your word choice.
:iconwildndark:
thank you both...i hope you take the chance to read the rest of my writings thank you *bows*

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Its only after you have lost everything that you are free to do anything.
:iconwildndark:
thank you both sooo much for reading this..hey if you can you can read the rest of my works and comment :) they wont bite ;) lol

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Its only after you have lost everything that you are free to do anything.
:iconbell-ghost:
damn...you made me cry while I read...
it's beautiful...
it hurts to lose somebody you love, specially the one with who you shared more then friendship... and somehow this poem makes me feel the same pain I did years before...
:iconwildndark:
thank you for commented...it makes me feel good to know others feel the same as i do...:) thank you

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Its only after you have lost everything that you are free to do anything.
:iconderangedfairy:
:hug: thats so moving, and sad... *sigh* another great piece.

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"Two roads diverged in a wood, and I- I took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference."
:iconwildndark:
thank you :)

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Its only after you have lost everything that you are free to do anything.
:iconin-a-reverie:
very moving.. the repetition works well.. and you have rhymed it well too..
:iconwildndark:
thank you :)

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Its only after you have lost everything that you are free to do anything.

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